Monday, March 20, 2017

Evaluation - Codes and Conventions

 1) How does your product use or challenge conventions and how does it represent social groups or issues?


The sequence starts off with long shot where there is a silhouette of a lady sitting on a chair in the centre of the frame facing the camera. By having the woman sit in the middle will help the audience be aware that she is important and that the film is going to be based on this character. There is very dark lighting and is set in a small room, similar to other thriller films that we have researched about. Since the aim of our opening is to slowly build tension by revealing information of the main character bit by bit, we know that by having the face of the woman hidden in darkness at the start, a sense of mysteriousness will be created. This allows the audience to briefly capture that this is a thriller film straight away from the codes and conventions.



This shot shows a drawing of a lady with abnormally large eyes; It presents society's perception of beauty (especially in Asia) which generally displays beautiful women as having overly huge eyes. A sharp line cuts through the middle of the drawing's pupil as if it is splitting it apart, which indicates violence. Following the theory of shapes that we have previously studied, circles represents goodness therefore by placing a line there it suggests an idea that darkness is approaching.


In order to emphasize that this is a thriller film, we color corrected the film to make it dark to give a creepy effect. We thought that this panning shot would suit best to put our title as it shows the entire collage on the wall, therefore would be more effective and powerful.


The audience is hinted that the character is obsessed with trying to look like women in magazines from numerous of collage that she assembled together on the wall. Most of her work shows peculiar faces she put together by adding features of different people together. The creation also shows a pattern of pictures of only skinny ladies with flawless skin. This implies that the main character is driven to achieve that "perfection" (that is realistically impossible to achieve) and is hung up on the belief constructed by the media.


Low angle allows the figure of the woman to be slightly distorted and also hides her face (like how she is hiding her secrets), reinforcing the idea of the character being secretive. From a quick glance, the distortion almost presents a ghostly figure. This angle is from under the desk where darkness takes up most of the frame, giving a sense of danger approaching. The seemingly calm and slow movement of her arm as she is drawing gives a false sense of security.




The pace of her movement suddenly shifts in this particular frame in contrast to the previous shots in order to symbolize the character emotional instability. The loud diegetic sound of pencil onto paper and fast straight strokes connotes a sense of frustration. In this case, the character is exasperated because of the difficulty of not being able to look young and beautiful again.


 This ending shot reveals most about the character's intentions. The aim of this shot is to leave the audience shocked and wanting to know more. This dramatic effect is supported by the use of music, ending with a peak of a note and absolute darkness, symbolizing that more would be revealed throughout the rest of the film. 

Thursday, February 9, 2017

Editing #1

Today we all edited different small sections using After Effects. I did some detailed editing of a extreme close up shot where the lady is sketching and scribbling a creepy portrait. I tried to edit it so that it fits in with the rough cut and that its in chronological order. I also edited the lighting to highlight the areas where there is light and emphasized the darker areas to create a more cinematic look, and make it more creepy by following this tutorial on youtube:


It took me quite a while to finish this part. It turned out quite well and suits the conventions of thriller (dark, eerie) however it didn't make that much of a difference compared to the original footage.


CHANGES

CHANGES BEFORE FILMING:

After we went location scouting, we discussed about what we can actually achieve and what will be too difficult for us to arrange. We thought that bringing a vinyl player wouldn't be a good idea since it's too heavy and would not be quite suitable if we brought an actual turntable to a hotel so we scrapped away the idea and thought that we could just put over creepy soundtrack so that tension can be created that way instead.

CHANGES WE MADE DURING THE FILMING PROCESS:

We were also uncertain if we were able to create the hallway shot where it zooms in into the spy hole as people were occasionally walking along the hallway and into their rooms ( so the timing wasn't appropriate). We tried to do it quickly anyway however it was shaky and didn't look as good as how we had expected it to be.

I tried to do a rough cut of the footage so that we can see the duration of this short sequence of zoom into the spy hole.



The clip was too long to be included in our film opening so we decided to leave it out. We also thought that it would be a bit too difficult to achieve.

Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Title Change

After we've gathered all the feedback from our peers, we found out that quite a number of people weren't able to grasp the concept of the plot. Our aim was to give an insight of the main character's intentions and our peers didn't mention their understanding in the feedback. As a result, we decided to change our title to "Skin" instead as it would make the idea more obvious to the audience and it also reinforces the idea of the character's intentions, as well as her obsession of youth and beauty. The word skin has connotations of flesh and also sounds creepy. This way, we are also making it easier for our audience to understand more of what is going on and will briefly know what the rest of the film will be based upon. 


Another reason for our decision is that most people don't know what the word "Limerence" means compared to "Skin" which everyone knows its definition. Here is a short video of us asking people if they know what the word "Limerence" means:




During the lesson we explored the fonts that we could use with the new title that we came up with:



In the end we agreed that the font Splendid 66 by Johan Holmdahi would suit best with our title "SKIN" as it is quite faded, rough, and imperfect which again links to the character and how she views herself:




In conclusion, we settled with "Skin" and this font as it is simple, easy to read, and looks best with the rest of the title sequence.


Monday, January 30, 2017

CREDITS #2

One of the common feedbacks we received were that the credits had to include the surname (and what role they had) because we only had the initials which does not the format of film openings. This was very challenging for us as we were unsure of what to do as it would be difficult for us to arrange a new plan and do another day of filming. Another reason why it would be hard for us is that we would have to position the items on the desk again to match the other shots for the film to remain smooth, so together we came up with two possible solutions:

1) CUT OUT AND STICK THE LETTERS AGAIN, BUT THIS TIME INCLUDING THE CREW'S FULL NAME AND THEIR ROLES THEN REFILM THE ZOOM IN PANNING SHOT OF COLLAGE ONLY

2) ADD IN THE CREW'S FULL NAME AND THEIR TASK DIGITALLY

As the poster and camera was kept at my house, I thought that it would be best if I did the cutting and sticking as well as the filming of the second credit sequence of the board. This was the outcome:



Class Feedback

We showed our rough cut for the rest of the class to see in order for them to be able to give feedback (by filling in a sheet of what we can improve and what impressed them) so that we can use to improve our final film.  I recorded their reaction using my phone:









What we will keep the same (or do slight tweaking) : 

  • Collage - panning into names/credits
  • Music


How we could improve:

  • Color grading 
  • Retake the credits part (collage part)
  • OR Add names digitally
  • Shorten and add details
  • Make video smoother (stabilize some shots)
  • Find a way to make it more easy to understand


Sunday, January 29, 2017

Rough Cut

We composed a rough cut for our title sequence to briefly present the order of our shots so that it is easier when we are editing the actual opening.